Monday, March 31, 2008

Arrgh. A Negative Review

Well, it had to happen sooner or later I suppose.

Flashpoint: Book One of the Underground received a negative review. Okay, negative is putting it mildly, it received 1 star (out of 5) at Amazon.



Buyer Be Aware, March 30, 2008
By
D. Henry (ca, usa) - See all my reviews 2 of the 3 reviews are written by the author. No place in the description of the book do they describe what the novel really is -- a propaganda piece for fundamentalist beliefs. There is nothing wrong with this type of novel. If those are your beliefs and you chose to engage in reading this type of material -- please enjoy. If you do not want to read a book with a strong pro-fundamentalist christian slant then do not read this book. With apologies to Mr. Creed it is also fairly poorly written. I tried to hang with it despite my discomfort with the subject material but in the end the terrible writing did me in and I had to put it down. Left it in a hotel room next to the bible figuring that's where he would like it to be anyhow. One word version of this review = drivel.

Obviously this reader didn't see the book description (with the information about Christian Fundamentalists and the Body of Christ) nor did s/he notice that the book is listed under the category of religion/ spirituality. And, I am thankful that s/he did leave it next to the hotel room Bible! what better place for it. As for the author writing 2/3 reviews? I have no idea what that refers to . . .

Guess it is a case of grin and bear it!

Tuesday, March 25, 2008

Free Market Ethics in the U.S.

In Oliver Stone's movie Wall Street, entrepreneur Gordon Gekko (Michael Douglas), is a profiteer known for buying, breaking, and selling off companies’ assets. The film is famous for Gekko’s "Greed is Good" speech.

Greed fuels the global free market. Its greed has twisted our culture through the Industrial Revolution and Computer Age to the nefarious point where it’s mutated the American dream. Self-indulgence, gluttony and lust have been considered culturally acceptable for several decades; in fact, they’re personal excesses to which we all aspire. When a restaurant chain called Hooters (depicted with eyes of questionable taste), can market itself so successfully on lust under the guise of patriotism with their "Let Freedom Wing" tour, the cultural impact of free market ethics obviously sports a deep root.

The Corporation, a 2003 documentary, examines the idea that corporations exist only to profit. These entities operate on economic Imperialism. Indeed, there are whole genres of near-future fiction governed mostly by dystopian megacorporations more powerful than governments, economic superpowers operating only within the boundaries of International law.

Alas, there’s nothing new under the sun. Essayist Noam Chomsky applies our age’s high-tech twists to the track-record of human behavior: history.

In the traditional "culture of fear," Latin American scholar, Piero Gleijeses writes, peace and order were guaranteed by ferocious repression, and its contemporary counterpart follows the same course: "Just as the Indian was branded a savage beast to justify his exploitation, so those who have sought social guerrillas, or terrorists, or drug dealers, or whatever the current term of art may be." The fundamental reason, however, is always the same: the savage beast may fall under the influence of "subversives" who challenge the regime of injustice, oppression and terror that must continue to serve the interests of foreign investors and domestic privilege.
--Noam Chomsky articles

The old adage says that power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely. As Chomsky posits, there is no doubt the American system exists to maintain the status-quo, with all its corporate lobbyist and Gross National Product goals. What can a single citizen do to challenge the entities of power that already loom all around us?

We have one tool: compassion.

As a culture, we insist upon compassion. Even those who believe Jesus was a mere prophet know that the gospel-answer to the question of WWJD is compassion. It’s a powerful tool.

Starting at home, our culture must ask some hard questions. Government’s primary goal is to protect its citizens. Thirty years ago, that meant military, police, and firefighters. This is a new world. Citizens now need protection from free market ethics, and we need to stand together. Forget our two-party system.

Look at the millions who can’t afford to go to the doctor or dentist, and demand that the for-profit corporate/ government system be fixed. The average citizen needs protection from free market greed in health care.

Have compassion on the great-grandmothers who must work as Wall-Mart greeters because Social Security has failed.

Personal economics permitting, boycott products made from Third World slave labor and sold on American shelves, or by companies who trash humankind’s Garden of Eden with toxic dumping.

Have compassion on the millions in the workforce who have but a 12th grade education, or less--can you imagine what the US Energy Crisis is doing to these families?

Gas has now gone over the dreaded $100 per barrel mark. With baby-boomers retiring and paying their doctor bills with their retirement funds (investments in profiteering corporate pharmaceutical stocks), the U.S. domestic infrastructure is propped-up and fragile. Free market greed has the USA careening down the path of a Second Great Depression, and an inevitable fall from economic superpower grace. Only compassion can save us.

Thursday, March 20, 2008

March '08 . . . The UNDERGROUND Newsletter





The March '08 edition of the UNDERGROUND newsletter
is now available. Here are some highlights:







In the article "The BOC's Watershed Moment" Frank suggests that Christian sub-culture is experiencing its own watershed moment: Do Christians need to engage in cultural activism to foster social reformation? Jump into the discussion at Frank's new message board at
FrankCreed.Proboards52.com. Easy to join!






CONTEST! Noir Fiction meets the Underground. The winner of the short
story contest will win $25 and publication in the year-end anthology
.






"Underground -- Undersea"; a short story by Grace Bridges, winner of
the November '07 short story contest. Congratulations Grace.


Have you read the first issue of Laser & Sword? In this issue of UNDERGROUND Frank interviews L&S's publisher Adam Graham.

Laser and Sword Magazine revives the lost art of serial short fiction with exciting results! It has been a long time since readers could follow a hero’s story from one episode to another. Comic books and televsion have stepped in the way of this lost art. Enter Laser & Sword. This e-zine specializes in serial Biblical spec-fiction that features good old-fashioned heroes.

If you have any comments or questions about Frank's interview with Laser & Sword publisher Adam Graham, check
Frank's message board. One lucky person who comments on the board will win a hard copy of the Laser & Sword's first edition.


Frank Creed's Critique Corner discusses
the value of literary criticism.



Frank conducted a phone interview with Maurice Broaddus, the Sinister Minister. He is the genius behind Mo*Con III, a conference for horror writers, Christian and secular. If you've any comments about the interview or questions about the Sinister Minister (love that moniker!) or Mo*Con, go ahead and ask them on Frank's board . . . we'll have Maurice come by and answer any questions that we can't.



Announcing the UNDERGROUND message board where we discuss everything from the UNDERGROUND newsletter, to Lost Genre Guild issues and events, to new Christian spec-fic novels, to news in the biz.




We welcome controversy! Visit frankcreed.proboards52.com



Sign up today to receive Frank Creed's UNDERGROUND newsletter. For more information about the Underground, visit booksoftheunderground. com

Tuesday, March 18, 2008

Authors Beware . . . Amazon is outta control!



Some craziness is happening at Amazon.


1. Like many publishers have, TWCP signed up for the "Search Inside" program at amazon.com for Flashpoint. It is a cool program where customers can actually see some of the contents of a book: copyright page, selected pages inside the book, foreword, about the author, etc.

Starting a couple of weeks ago, the "Search Inside" was gone. A day later, it was back . . . only to disappear and return seemingly at will.

My publisher made some inquiries and was told that Amazon is testing the Search Inside function and will continue to do so for a couple more weeks. During the testing, some titles will revert to Look Inside and others will have neither. All is supposed to return to normal when the tests are finished.

2. Another feature of Amazon listings is the ability for people to "tag" one's product. A tag is a descriptor that can be searched. A friend pointed out to me that her book was tagged with some bizarre descriptors. A little more searching for other friends books showed the same. Tags like:


bad erotica . . . boycott . . . bad fiction . . . big thing . . . bad theology . . . porn . . . propaganda!

Puzzling and just a little irritating. You can check to see who tagged your product, but rarely does the profile of the person reveal anything other than they have a dislike of Christian fiction.

What can an author do about it? Not much, but typically, less than 12 tags are shown on the first page. Go in and add some more relevant tags and then you can push the hurtful tags off that front product page.

3. Something that did happen to me: When checking out the Flashpoint listing I saw that the price was almost $5 higher than the retail price. I did some searching and found it was a surcharge called a Sourcing Fee. This fee is calculated before shipping and taxes.

I called Amazon (which is a lesson in patience itself) and was told that a sourcing fee is attached to a book when it is out of print or otherwise difficult to locate! But, but, but . . . I said. I called my publisher who contacted the distributor who then talked to someone at Amazon. Meanwhile, I wrote to customer service and this is the response I received:

"While we do charge a sourcing fee for some special order items, that fee is almost always under $5.00.Our surcharges or sourcing fees reflect the handling costs for stocking, assembling, and packaging each order. Some items may incur a surcharge or sourcing fee to cover the expense of selling these items; we regret that we must occasionally pass these costs along to our customers."


The distributor was successful and the sourcing fee was removed. Good end to the story, but I wonder how many people were put off from ordering a copy of the novel during those five days?

It seems that Amazon is constantly trying out new ways of serving their customers and perhaps new ways of making additional money! whatever the reason, keep an eye on your book listings at Amazon. Contact them through customer service to see if you can get any satisfaction. If that doesn't work, call your publisher.

Monday, March 03, 2008

The Void: Book Tour Contest!




The CFRB is offering a prize (a copy of THE OATH, by Frank Peretti), during the tour of THE VOID, by Mark Mynheir during the week of March 2nd.

The winner will be announced on the 8th, Saturday of that week.

I will be looking for the best comment to our blog posts on any of the CFRB blog sites. Please leave an email address where we'll be able to contact you further.

Sunday, March 02, 2008

CFRB March Tour: The VOID


  • This month on the Christian Fiction Review tour, we are featuring The Void, by Mark Mynheir.

    First, a synopsis of The Void:

    Florida Department of Law Enforcement Agent Robbie Sanchez devotes her life to crime prevention, and it shows: She has no personal life and doesn’t know the meaning of a day off. After all, someone has to be around to clean up the mess crime leaves behind.

    So when Officer Brad Worthington is brutally murdered, Agent Sanchez is called to the scene along with Brad’s best friend, Detective Eric Casey. The two turn to Lifetex, the genetics lab near the scene, hoping their elaborate security system might have captured the crime outside.

    But what’s going on inside the lab is far worse: a renegade scientist is cloning humans! As Robbie and Eric pursue clues–and a growing attraction–they are caught in a deadly battle as the clones begin to act on their own volition…but this battle threatens to claim more than human life; the clones are vying for human souls.


    As I was preparing for this tour, I did some research and found some interesting information:

    The Void, according to KC Reviews blogging at the Lost Genre Guild, is labeled "suspense." KC wonders why it is not labeled as sci-fi since the plot is clearly sci-fi. She goes on to muse that perhaps it is the CBA guidelines that indicate that concept of sci-fi isn't popular amongst their customers, hence, suspense.

    Mynheir has authored two previous books: Rolling Thunder (The Truth Chasers Book One) and From the Belly of the Dragon (The Truth Chasers Book Two).

    Jill Elizabeth Nelson (of the To Catch A Thief books) describes The Void as "one of the best books I've read in 2007."

    Mark Mynheir is a police officer whose law enforcement career has included positions as a narcotics agent, a S.W.A.T. team member, and a homicide detective; he is also a former U.S. marine.

    Creston Mapes and Mark Mynheir are both published with Multnomah. "Mark's novel The Void is the bomb." Mapes also reviewed The Void: The Void is nothing short of a page-turner. Mynheir is truly hitting his stride as one of our industry’s most notable Christian novelists. This latest book has it all: suspense, humor, intrigue, realistic police action, and one thought-provoking story line.

    In an interview with DiAnn Mills, Mynheir reports that The Void is his first novel written in first person.

    He was featured on the 700 Club, "Inside the SWAT"

    Mynheir wrote "Smoke Screen: Satan's Lies about Marijuana" in Focus of Family's Breakaway Magazine.


The Void
Mark Mynheir
ISBN-13: 978-1590524008
Multnomah Books (August 21, 2007)
352 pgs. $12.99

Visit Mark Mynheir's website at CopWriterdotcom
Purchase The Void at Amazondotcom

Visit these blogs during the tour week (Sunday March 3—Saturday March 9): The Christian Fiction Review Blog Back to the Mountains Queen of Convolution Between Sundays Bibliophile's Retreat TWCP Authors The Melody Within The Time Mistress Virtual Book Tour de Net Cathi's Chatter S.M. Kirkland